Hotep,
The progression of our creative writing class has become a
target of authoritarians, aligning to discredit any resemblance of redeemable
qualities concerning the death row prisoners.
Our class attendance has dwindled since the recent
suspensions of the volunteers. A setting
that once held 20-plus pupils is no more than a handful of dedicated writers’ a
skeleton crew of a movement so loud that the prison administration felt the
urgency to muffle our creative sound.
In a way, cheating the free world. Blocking the exposure to heartfelt expressions,
which casts clear reflections of compassion.
On 8/8/17, our class (9 pupils) was allotted twenty minutes to create an
expression from the following prompt:
Betrayed, lilac-scented soap, a plane ticket.
It all begins with a haiku.
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A plane ticket screams
Lilac-scented soap reminds
Betrayed by true love
I felt betrayed when I opened the glove box. Her scent was always captivating. The car reeked of her presence. Lilac-scented soap was her hygienic calling
car, since high school. But, when I made
a surprise visit to her job yesterday, something was very different about her.
The excitement of seeing me was no longer there. Her reaction to my unexpected showing was one
of disappointment; almost as if she was expecting to see someone else.
I kissed her on the cheek, and she nearly pushed me
away. I had to know what was going on
with her. Had our relationship run its
course? What had I done wrong? Was she seeing another man?
I left her job without incident. I went to her car, using the spare key. I opened the door. I sat in the driver’s seat as if sitting
there would tell me all that I needed to know, but it didn’t.
My initial instinct led me to the console. I found nothing that would make me
suspicious, just some spare change, chewing gum and a pair of Afrocentric
earrings that I had yet to see in her earlobes.
The next move was toward the glove box. As soon as I opened it a different scent took
over the space. It was a feminine scent,
unfamiliar to my sense of smell. A scent
much different than the one I had come to know over the last twelve years.
I pulled out a smart phone that made me feel like a
fool. A woman’s scarf was next, then, a
plane ticket to Jamaica. I sat there,
stunned, having no idea what I would do next.
Be Easy,
MannofStat
Copyright © 2017 by Leroy Elwood Mann
Cheating is bad.
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